GabriellaCB

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taking nature shots!!!

HAHAHAHA don't you guys dare to think sick! i bet y'all had something else in mind XD oh that's SO epic. and i'm only thirteen, how could i possibly do it LMAO

anyways, *digression~~ haha* i'm really proud of my first 4 shots for the new album ("nature"). i've never tried it out before and i don't really have the time to do these sort of things [although i really, REALLY want to]. the pictures are so pretty ^^

you know, i'd really like to stop time and just do all the things i wanna do. it sucks how time keeps passing by and you are just not able to achieve anything at all. it'd be great if i had all the time in the world to do ANYTHING.

anything at all.

~gabby
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life and death

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okay, so basically, i have this literature project and i'm supposed to come up with a poem that relates the effects of the latest BP oil spill. this is my first draft and i'm not exactly the very poetic kinda person so please don't be too hard on me :) but at the same time, i do appreciate constructive criticism. thanks and i hope you enjoy reading it :)

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Life & Death

look into my eyes
and tell me that you’re sorry

i look at the paradise
now just a deathly water body

what have you done
to my enchanted haven

it was once laughter and fun
but now it’s just oil-laden

flippers coated in black oil
unable to swim in the sea of Life

declare a state of turmoil
as what becomes of the wildlife

held back, suppressed
in the aftermath of the chaos

gulf of mexico fully unrest
shores lined by the slick black gloss

i’ve been denigrated
i’ve been held hostage

they’ve been tortured
they’ve been damaged

the loss of everlasting freedom
so won’t you say you’re sorry?

as Death sets upon them
all I can say is, “I’m sorry.”


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so how is it? please comment, thanks! :) fyi, this poem is told from 2 different POVs (the bolded and non-bolded). can you guess which POVs they are? hint: one is an animal, one is not ;) do tell me if you are unable to tell cause it means i need to work on emphasizing their characteristics a little more

<3
gabbby
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